Artist's CommentsThe boats at Aker harbour Comments
i hope you don't mind me giving a little critique as a comment - i'm too poor for premium membership!
i think your colours are beautiful - the sea is spot on too! the only thing that gets to me a little is the sky - more specifically the clouds... ..are they too in focus? too thin/transparent like mist somehow the perspective doesn't seem quite right with them either - it could be that there is as much detail in the far distant clouds as there is in the fore clouds and that somehow "flattens" the sky as though it was a mural hanging behing the scene. I wouldn't say that there was much to do to this at all... ..have fun! -- more paintings on my website [link] The reason I did it this way was because the rain clouds closer in the picture are less defined because they do not have sun shine on them, and they are heavier than the other clouds. While the clouds in the background are more defined because they get light on them, defining them. I admit the clouds furthest away are lighter than they would have been in real life. But this is a painting, and that is an effect. If I wanted everything to look exactly as it does in real life, I'd become a photographer.
Thank you for your comment. I am glad you liked it. -- Personal Website "Den som kommer først til mølla, får rent mel i både pose og sekk..." =MindOfLead *ThePencilClub *painters =the-surreal-arts "If I wanted everything to look exactly as it does in real life, I'd become a photographer."
Nope, you would have giving up painting (with light or paint) all together. "Real life" can not be truly reproduced, and that's why we call it real life. - I felt like being annoying, sorry... Som nevnt ut før, et udmerket stykke arbeid generelt sett Hils pus! -- Photoblog Stock Well, you're right on that part
-- Personal Website "Den som kommer først til mølla, får rent mel i både pose og sekk..." =MindOfLead *ThePencilClub *painters =the-surreal-arts Aw, thank you, John! I really appreciate it
-- Personal Website "Den som kommer først til mølla, får rent mel i både pose og sekk..." =MindOfLead *ThePencilClub *painters =the-surreal-arts |
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